::~HLOVATE~aku tulis lagu nie utk GT_i[GreaTroubleMaker_i'm a senior].sbb ada part dlm tu yg mmg aku nak masukkan lagu nie.kalau korang nak layan lagu nie..leh je wat melodi seniri pakai gitar kapok.enjoy!::
~HLOVATE~
You wonder
Is it an angel or yet
Maybe a sweet dream that you can’t forget
So close yet far-fetched
Causing you to float on the line
between reality and fantasy
c/o Haunted the nightmares
Creates the ecstasy
Hlovate~oh poisonous honey
Love and hate
Driving me crazy
The poison ivy of Venus
Killing with venom so sweet
You’re losing your head
Don’t want it yet it keep haunting
Losing yourself in the suffocating mist
c/o
The blind arrows of
Piercing cold ice and
warm melting heart
Tearing me apart
"...saya dalam gelap... ...dan salah siapa kalau saya tak nampak?... ...kenapa orang keliling hanya pandai bising... ...tapi tak pandai menghulur tangan?..."
VERSUS
"....Minn..AO...and the sun.... ....the past vs the present... ...skate and the street...changes and turning points in life.... ...everything is under His will....."
...Ked...Hadiah...Nawal...a lady....a romeo...a skater... .....Florida-Virginia.... ....everything is okay in the end.if it's not okay, then it's not the end....
".....enter the SPM year...aarrrggghhh.... .....budak jenayah bertemu buku dengan rak bukunya.... .....ice vs ice...ferum vs aluminium.... ...Addin Shah vs Benz Alif...."
".....i want to have nothing to do with him..."
"...knowing a Didi and an Addin..."
"...changes of equation... from Addin Shah vs Benz Alif=Didi+Benji..."
5tahun5bulan
".....a Plain Jane's diary.... ....growing up and learnin ain't easy... ...not another mere fuzzy-mushy entries... ...antara Sultan Mansur,Jebat dan Hang Li Po,it's just part of the story...."
cerita nie aku publish atas wish sorang kawan.pasal dia penat tengok aku tulis macam2,tapi baca sorang2 je.so,dia nak aku share.aku pun tak tau la apa yang korang rasa baca cerita nie.actually,GT_i ada trilogy[huhuh...cam LOTR pulak].tapi aku akan publish but by bit.dari GreaTroubleMaker_i,GreaTroubleMaker_i'm a senior,sampai GT_i'm outta teens.enjoy reading btw
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sumer yg aku tulis nie[cerita/cerpen/novel/whatever]actually product dr experience aku,experience kengkawan aku.observation aku,imagination aku.memana yang korang rasa merapu tu...setengah tu betul sebenarnye
~VERSUS~
nie material baru.takder kaitan langsung-langsung la dengan GT_i n whatnot.hikayat alam street.orang pandang stylo coolio.yep,true.memang cool.but comes with a price.kalau nak berubah from what we're used too.then that'll be hell to pay as a manner of speaking.sebab everything dah rasa part of the bone n blood.kebetulan dah halfway thru dengan versus,it was kinda me speakin coz i was kinda ripped from my ol'self too[but cut out all the mush la.that aint me.serious.]untuk versus nie,judgement tepulang pada masing-masing.everybody passed paths along the road of life.there's always be dilemma when it comes to choosing.btw,nie abiskan publish versus[PartI] dulu.then insya Allah GT_i[i'm a senior]<--frankly speaking it aint much but to complete the jigsaw,sorry.jangan letak expectation tinggi2,k.
IS THIS IT
Is this it?
I dunno the cause
The result
Nor the beat
Is it really it?
I dunno how nor when
Up? Low? In the gutter or glen?
Undecoded, mystery air?
Seems like near but not there
Without no cut or tear
All of sudden
The pain is too much to bear
The vain feels like a torturing lair
Is it really, really it?
One second chill the spine
The other, melted under the sunshine
Set tears and laughter on the same line
Possessing such powers that stop the time
Is this it?
He knows
And He will lead
Patung koala sederhana besar yang memegang bantal kecil bentuk hati itu sekadar dipandangnya.Holding Minn Edina right here.Tulisan yang bersulam pada bantal bentuk hati itu membuatkan Minn terpaksa mengalih pandangan ke lain.Sekarang hujung minggu pertama bulan Februari.Semalam baru sampai dari Kedah.Kelmarin AO dah terbang kembali ke Sydney.Minn bangun dari duduknya di katil.Patung koala itu dicapai dengan sebelah tangan sambil dia melangkah ke arah almari pakaian.Pintu almari itu dibuka.Seketika koala comel itu ditatapnya.Kemudian dipeluk erat dengan mata yang terasa panas.Bibirnya mengukir senyum pahit.Even the koala smells like him.Purposely to remind me of you?
"You need to be in here koala guy."Ujar Minn perlahan sambil meletakkan patung itu di rak atas. "Out of sight,out of mind."
Pintu almarinya ditutup.Minn kembali melangkah ke katil.Sampul berwarna merah darah yang datang bersama si koala itu dicapainya.Laci night table ditarik dan sampul surat itu dimasukkan ke dalamnya.Sedang dia menutup laci handset di atas katil berbunyi menandakan ada mesej masuk.
Bibir Minn mengukir senyum bila membaca nama yang tertera di skrin.Hampir dia ketawa bila membaca mesej yang diterimanya.Dia bangun dari katil dan melangkah ke pintu.Sekilas dia memandang diri yang dah sedia bersiap di cermin.Letak selendang dibetulkan.Langkahnya laju menuruni tangga.Kunci kereta dicapai dari rak kunci.
"Angah pergi dulu!"
Dia menunggu talian bersambung.Lambatnya...
"Assalamualaikum."Suara di hujung talian menyapa.
"Waalaikumsalam."Perlahan AO menjawab. "Che'E?"
"Ashraff..."
"Minn dah balik?"
"Mm..dah.Semalam."
"Dia ada?Saya nak cakap dengan dia."
Eviena menghela nafas panjang. "Angah tak ada kat rumah."
"Dia ke mana?"
Nafas berat dilepas perlahan. "Angah keluar."Dia terhenti sejenak. "Dengan Sun."
Diam.
Eviena mengadah siling. "Ashraff?"
"Awak bagi amanah saya pada dia?"
"I did."
"Has she gone through everything?"
"Ain't sure.I respect her privacy.But I think she did."
AO memandang sepi keluar tingkap.Mungkin ini jawapan Minn? "It's OK then.Thanks."
"Ashraff,nak pesan apa-apa kat Angah?"
"Tak."Suaranya terasa berbuku di dada. "Don't even tell her that I called."
"Okay..."Perlahan Eviena menyetujuinya.Hormat dengan kehendak AO. "Sure?"
"Yes.Assalamualaikum."Talian dimatikan.
Posted at 03:41 am by hlovate
xperlu tahu.. November 23, 2009 11:31 PM PST weyh iera.. kalo ko kata citer ni bodoh, ko lagi bodoh sebab ko gi bace citer ni pehal?
dah x suke tu x yah ah bace.
ape masalah ko?!
hlovate, ko x yah pedulik ah ape iera tu cakap..
novel ko mmg best. banyak mesej yg tersirat..
go on hlovate!!
jinnai_tageru@yahoo.com November 4, 2009 10:51 PM PST iera.. kalau ko rase hlovate punya karya teruk, aku cabar ko buat novel.. mesti lawan hlovate punya.. kalo x, jgn sesekali ko ckp hlovate nye karya cm rubbish.. bile novel ko dh publish ko nye novel jgn lupe email kt aku.. dan kalo ko nye rating lbh rendah drpd hlovate nye, aku nk mntk maaf scre trbuke kpd hlovate n peminat dia..
Hlovate, teruskan usaha!! jgn pedulikan kata2 iera.. ramai lagi peminat yg hargai karya anda..
putri ct October 17, 2009 12:36 AM PDT kalu nak ayat betul2 ikut bahasa beli kamus la beb...jgn baca novel ayat gini...i rasa u rasa u cikgu BM @ BI..Novel skema bosanlah...
aNne October 16, 2009 04:12 AM PDT 4 iera..
jgn slalu mngutuk org.
kn da kne bambu ngn all admire hlovate.
klw da buat blog.post kt ktowg,ble gak ktorang bambu ko pnye blog.
kasi malu dri tu cket!!
azaren..
myb ape yg awk btolkn e2 btol.
n it can b wrong too.
mgkin dy mksudkn,rak yg plg atas.
who knows,dy yg wrote tis novel.
we jz read.
meroketkebulan..
aq sokong ko talk bout iera tu.
hahha..
hlovate!chayo2!!
a.k.u September 23, 2009 08:39 AM PDT korg sume iera tu ak rase bkn ape, myb somehow cite ni ada kaitan dgn dia smpikan menyentuh rasa hati. besalah manusia kan. emosi sket kot. bkn suma org blh menulis slumber yaya mcm hlovate bt.
he/she juz tulis apa yg dia dah alami, somehow experience2 yg dia ada bg pengajaran kat kita suma.
dont blame each other lah. sian page ni dah crowded dgn amarah.
org yg t'baca pon blh hilang mood ow..
go hlovate! secara x lgsg uslub dan manhaj hlovate pakai ni blh thn.. =]
najiha July 20, 2009 09:22 AM PDT aku tak sangka plak ade yg tak suka karya hlovate..
chick89 June 23, 2009 11:44 AM PDT ...~rubbish bnda lak iera...??<<<ko yg x phm citer neyh....jgn lak nk salah kan org lak!!!huh...!!.....dah ko pandai sgt ko publish guna otak ko sndiri la x yah nk kutuk2 org~....no one perfect la!!!mark th word!!!~......
MeroketKeBulan June 9, 2009 06:09 AM PDT Halo! who's said its rubbish? aku rasa ok jer..cite di alam nyata lagi... if ko rs ko blh buat cite yang lg ok dr ni.. prove it! make ur own blog then tell me..aku nak review..
purple and white March 21, 2009 01:26 AM PDT x de sape paksa ko bce cite hlovate ni iera..dan x de sape suruh ko bukak blog dia..maybe ko fkr ko punya writer lagi best..klu best sngt publish je lah x yah nak kutuk2 orang laen....
mechan manekineko January 17, 2009 02:47 AM PST aish..
marah aku bila orang marah pasal citer hlovate..
iera, semak la ko kat cni..
sukati hlovate la tulih apa..
ko yang sakit hati tu pahal?
ape punye makhluk la ko ni..
kalau tak suka, jgn masuk..
buat sampah kat cni je..
anyway hlovate, please publish citer ni,
kitorang sume tengah tunggu bila nak sampai kat bookstore..(^^)
have a happy life..
sabrina January 6, 2009 01:33 AM PST kusokong ko hlovate walau diaman ko berada.Ignore je la org yg suke mengutuk.I'm sure u know bout a story of a deaf little frog. (^_^)
cekodok December 27, 2008 09:36 AM PST relaks arr
alahai
dia wat blog ni nak soh kita baca..
buka mta sikit
byk pengajaran
ierah,,,sometime org tak suka baca benda yang dia rasa tak mamp ikut
so just diam jer arr
n tok sah buka
hbis citer
wei azaren..huhu
ko ni mmg editor baek punya...
bgs2
bile dh nak publsh sng sikit editor 2,,,huh
tp bgs arr
Name December 6, 2008 05:01 AM PST poyo gle ko iera..
bjet ko bguz sgt r..
xyh la nk kutuk2..
xske dhlaa..
buhsan ak spesies cenggini..
hlovate,xyh peduli org cmnih..
truskn usaah..
btw,org slau kate,
klu ade p'hlg,hslnye lebey b'ksn..
dunola btl ke x..
huhu~
aku November 20, 2008 11:35 PM PST wei iera..
xpyh r nk kutuk2 klu dh xsuke..
biar r hlovete nk write cmnerpun...
bkn sshln ko..
xnk lyn sudah
xluak r klu stkt ko xlyn..
nth2 ko tulis cerpen(bkn novel) pn carca marba..
benci tol aku spesis cmnie...
go hlovate
gi azaren
perMYsuri November 8, 2008 12:05 PM PST ello eira...it's hlovate blog n hikayat.so plz respect!. klo suke continue bace...tak suke.closed it.huhhh..
i rse azaren nie virtual editor hlovate lah...leh jdik DBP..hehe take it as compliment.enjoy learning grammer.
Name November 6, 2008 06:03 AM PST no body's perfect
so do our hlovate
mistakes happens all d time
iera November 3, 2008 08:07 PM PST bapak bodoh cite nih!
hlovate,jgn publish ar cite rubbish cmni!
buat malu kaum je!
chipsmore June 3, 2007 02:25 PM PDT ada OCD dgn grammar kot? something that she can't resist doing :P jgn marah eh? just kidding :D
baTtaB May 23, 2007 09:45 PM PDT aha...relax la guyz,kn hlovate dh ckp yg die ukan nyer witer/penulis tp storyteller/tukang karut...
azaren...teruskan gan mengedit,tk pe aku suka...leh gak bljr grammer/tatabhsa gan ko.ahaksz...
amie May 13, 2007 08:47 PM PDT aku sokong ko azareen..knape org tak sokong ko ek?adakah mereka jeles sb slalu ko yg first ltk komen? hehehhehehe..
azaren April 24, 2007 07:43 PM PDT I've been called worst (`',)
I hope you enjoyed Versus as much as I enjoyed Hlovate perfecting it.
yan April 18, 2007 07:56 AM PDT yaa azaren u're also terrifying....can u just consider it as technical mistakes...
nurfa March 21, 2005 03:13 AM PST bagus la... ade cikgu tatabahasa...hehehe..(",)
azaren March 14, 2005 07:32 AM PST "Ujar Minn perlahan sambil meletakkan patung itu rak atas". My BM is kinda terrifying but.. maybe it should be "meletakkan patung itu di rak atas" atau "di atas rak".
